Some peopl believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matter that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Last

week I saw a discussion on the television between a professor and parents, the discussion was about the matter if

children

should be allowed to make their own choices. The professor suggested that it is important so that

children

know the

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affects

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effects

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of the

decisions

that they make, the parents disagree with

this

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statement

statements

and suggested that it will create a society with

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individuals

inviduals

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individuals

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and give my

opinion

. The

first

opinion

is that

children

should make their own

decisions

, which will result to deal with the consequences of the

decisions

.

For example

, they can choose to go to bed

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lately

,

this

has an

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affect

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on the

child

because

her

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or she is tired.

Next

time the

child

,

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thinks better

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which time he or she goes to bed. Another example is choosing what kind of food they want, if it is unhealthy they feel less fit and they will eventually they will change their eating habits.

However

, opponents say that young

children

cannot make

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this decision

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decisions

, I completely agree with

this

statement because when a

child

is really young he or she cannot learn from the mistakes that they make. The

second

opinion

is that

children

should not make their own

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choices

choises

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choices

, because it ensures that

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society consists of individuals.

For example

, when a

child

chooses what to eat he only thinks about what he or she likes. I completely disagree with

this

opinion

, because these

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decisions

decesions

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decisions

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to be made at a certain moment in their lives. So it is better to start early, so the parents can point out that the decision was a mistake. To conclude, in my point of view, it is important to let

children

make their own

decisions

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so that the

children

can learn from their mistakes.

On the other hand

, it is necessary that

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is not

to

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young.