Some peopl believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matter that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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which time he or she goes to bed. Another example is choosing what kind of food they want, if it is unhealthy they feel less fit and they will eventually they will change their eating habits. Change preposition
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