Wild animals serve no purpose in the modern world and trying to save them is a waste of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We are lucky enough to be surrounded by a wide variety of fauna. If poaching was still permitted,
animals
would have been long gone. It is believed by some that wild
animals
, specifically, serve no purpose today, and our governments should do nothing to preserve them. In my opinion,
this
mentality is very poor and inhumane. In
this
essay, I will explain, why protecting
wildlife
is a worthwhile goal ,and ,contrary to the belief, institutions should in fact invest more
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their well-being and in preserving their habitat. We are alive because wild
animals
are! Mammals, carnivores,
herbivores
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, are all necessary for a balanced ecosystem. Even if the number of one
of
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decreases, there will be an imbalance and
catastrophic
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impact will happen on
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of
animals
. Maintaining
life
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cycle is one of the key jobs of all these
animals
. If all the carnivores like lions and tigers,
for instance
, would die, the grazing population,
such
as deers, would increase abruptly resulting in over-grazing and degradation of land in the long term. Ultimately, they will
also
die of
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of food. And, if all the
animals
die, human beings would not be able to survive for long. Another,
however
, less significant, reason would be to preserve it for our future generations to see. Wouldn’t it be great for them to experience
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diverse
wildlife
? It sure would be! Many of us really wish, if the extinct
animals
like dinosaurs and dodos would be here on the planet, we would be able to look at them
in-person
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, and would know what they were really like,
instead
of just looking at their skeletons in a museum.
Moreover
, who knows, having them around would have, maybe, opened new ways of leading life. In conclusion, there may be some valid reasons why,
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very few, people think, it is okay to let
wildlife
go extinct,
nevertheless
, their reasons are entirely unfair
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the innocent creatures. I firmly believe that the government and other
wildlife
protection agencies should come together to preserve endangered species and their natural habitat
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so that they can live on earth with us
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