Wild animals serve no purpose in the modern world and trying to save them is a waste of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are lucky enough to be surrounded by a wide variety of fauna. If poaching was still permitted,
animals
would have been long gone. It is believed by some that wild animals
, specifically, serve no purpose today, and our governments should do nothing to preserve them. In my opinion, this
mentality is very poor and inhumane. In this
essay, I will explain, why protecting wildlife
is a worthwhile goal ,and ,contrary to the belief, institutions should in fact invest more for
their well-being and in preserving their habitat.
We are alive because wild Change preposition
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animals
are! Mammals, carnivores, herbivores
, are all necessary for a balanced ecosystem. Even if the number of one Correct word choice
and herbivores
of
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kind
decreases, there will be an imbalance and Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
catastrophic
impact will happen on Correct article usage
a catastrophic
other kind
of Change the wording
another kind
other kinds
animals
. Maintaining life
cycle is one of the key jobs of all these Correct article usage
the life
animals
. If all the carnivores like lions and tigers, for instance
, would die, the grazing population, such
as deers, would increase abruptly resulting in over-grazing and degradation of land in the long term. Ultimately, they will also
die of unavailability
of food. And, if all the Correct article usage
the unavailability
animals
die, human beings would not be able to survive for long.
Another, however
, less significant, reason would be to preserve it for our future generations to see. Wouldn’t it be great for them to experience a
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wildlife
? It sure would be! Many of us really wish, if the extinct animals
like dinosaurs and dodos would be here on the planet, we would be able to look at them in-person
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in person
instead
of just looking at their skeletons in a museum. Moreover
, who knows, having them around would have, maybe, opened new ways of leading life.
In conclusion, there may be some valid reasons why, a
very few, people think, it is okay to let Correct article usage
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wildlife
go extinct, nevertheless
, their reasons are entirely unfair for
the innocent creatures. I firmly believe that the government and other Change preposition
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wildlife
protection agencies should come together to preserve endangered species and their natural habitat,
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