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some people thing that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. others, however, belive that school is the place to learn this

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It is certain that the future of mankind depends on the future generation. People hold
a different opinions
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different opinions
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 on, who is responsible to guide
the
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them
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 to build a better planet. In
this
 article, I will argue both
parents
 and teachers have equal responsibility to direct towards the right path. In recent times, I could see the media predominantly covers the crimes committed by very young people. Obviously, the
parents
 play a vital role in their activities as the home is the
first
 school where children learn their behaviours by looking at the
parents
.
For instance
, we might see a child trying to smoke by using a piece of paper.
As a result
, after they grow up, the impact would be on the community.
On the other hand
, a school is a place, where the student interacts with
the
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 whole variety of people from wider society
such
 as teachers, peers and other students.
In addition
 to that, in many countries, the government has included social study in the local curriculum to teach morals and values which
further
 assist the students in learning behavioural science.
Hence
, the experience might influence the children on how to co-operate and learn to respect others' values.
Therefore
, we cannot leave the responsibility only to the
parents
 for their children’s behaviours. Considering the above statements and views, in my opinion, I strongly accept both
parents
 and school have equal responsibility over the behaviours of the children. We, as a society should work together to guide our
next
 generation for their betterment and society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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