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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

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State authorities could make the studies from primary to tertiary school fully funded
,
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 so that the students don't have to pay the
tution
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tuition
 fees. In my opinion, I support
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preliminary
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 university
education
 should be free,
hence
, everyone can study for their future
growth
 and utilize their talent for their nation.
Firstly
, most people do not have adequate
fund
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 to support
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education
 till
the
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 university degrees.
Therefore
, talented and brilliant learners can make it to the best universities and their
growth
 will not be hampered.
Additionally
, not every family will be able to educate all the kids, so some
section
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 of children could remain uneducated or restricted to higher school level only.
Secondly
, basic
education
 is essential for the future
growth
 of the person,
In other words
, the
first
 10-15 years of
education
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critical
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 role in building the person's skills and behaviour. These skills will play
vital
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 role in securing
stable
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 job or starting their own business.
Thirdly
,
higher
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 literacy level in the nation will help in building the country for
future
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.
As a result
, talented individuals will be able to apply their knowledge to create or invent new
equipments
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 or technologies for the country.
For example
, some countries are promoting self-made
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 aircraft so that it reduces their dependencies on other nations or regions. To conclude, in my opinion, I prefer to have government bodies
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completely support the studies of the students from preschool to institute grade to back families with financial constraints and provide greater opportunities for the talented person to contribute
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 national
growth
.
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