As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, enterprises play an integral role in the development of society. Some people lean toward the view that businesses only contribute to their economy regardless of the social concern. From my perspective, their responsibility towards society should be at the highest level.

Firstly

, there is no denying that corporations need to make more money to maintain their operation. Specifically, to survive in

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competition

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market, they cannot lack strategies

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in order to ensure

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profits so that they can pay for labour costs, electric bills and so on.

For instance

, a company will be on the verge of

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bankruptcy

in a short time if

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cannot earn enough money to cover

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the aforementioned fees.

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, some manufacturers are in need of a huge

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of budget to invest in research which makes their products become more innovative and demandable.

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, they are

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in charge of paying for

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to the government and a variety of nameless

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.

On the other hand

, I strongly support that it is really essential for

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companies to have

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obligation to

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society. It can be said without

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that

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huge figures of industrial areas are

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demolishing

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local environment. As an illustration, the water resources of many provinces in which the industrial zones were put were contaminated seriously.

Therefore

, if the enterprises take steps to dispose of waste properly, local people can enjoy new products without any concern about the natural habitat. As a matter of fact, they should be more active in

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activities in the area where they operate. Since that would give people here more opportunities to save more lives. In fact, many regions in which these companies put their headquarters or factories do not have access to resources to deal with problems like hunger or diseases. In conclusion, despite the fact that profit is considered

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one of the

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of business, social and environmental issues should

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their priority list of traders.