You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter you should: Introduce yourself. Describe your plans for the party. And invite your neighbour to come to the party.

This

is Ayesha writing to you to let you know that I am your new neighbour, who has just moved in a fortnight before from Pakistan. I am working as a chemist and was so busy

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adjusting new job and setting new home that couldn't get time to host a housewarming party. Now that I am completely settled, I am hosting one

this

weekend. Since the community is new

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me so I wanted to break the ice and get along with everybody. Some colleagues and old friends are invited to the place to enjoy some leisure time.

However

, when people will gather and music will be played there will be some noise around that can bother you. I just need a little cooperation from your side and bear with little noise that might happen. I am extremely exhilarated to host ,everyone.

Moreover

, I would like to invite you as well as we never had any interaction before. I would love to know you and host you. I expect your presence at my house

this

weekend

then

, do let me know about your availability. Yours Sincerely,

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

187 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter you should: Introduce yourself. Describe your plans for the party. And invite your neighbour to come to the party.

The Greeting

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