You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter you should: Introduce yourself. Describe your plans for the party. And invite your neighbour to come to the party.

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is Ayesha writing to you to let you know that I am your new neighbour, who has just moved in a fortnight before from Pakistan. I am working as a chemist and was so busy

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adjusting new job and setting new home that couldn't get time to host a housewarming party. Now that I am completely settled, I am hosting one

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weekend. Since the community is new

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me so I wanted to break the ice and get along with everybody. Some colleagues and old friends are invited to the place to enjoy some leisure time.

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, when people will gather and music will be played there will be some noise around that can bother you. I just need a little cooperation from your side and bear with little noise that might happen. I am extremely exhilarated to host ,everyone.

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, I would like to invite you as well as we never had any interaction before. I would love to know you and host you. I expect your presence at my house

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, do let me know about your availability. Yours Sincerely,

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

housewarming
neighbourhood
settle in
concern
apologize
disturbance
kindly
considerate
join
gathering
introduce
socialize
appreciate
understanding

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter you should: Introduce yourself. Describe your plans for the party. And invite your neighbour to come to the party.

The Greeting

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Holding International games such as The Olympic Games is an exciting event. Some people think that it has positive effects while other argue that it is a waste of money. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion.

University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studyng abroad outweigh the disadvantages?