You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Although you have never studied computing, you have always been interested ill computers - you buy magazines about them, and youlJave taug/lt yourself many skills 011 your computer at home. You have jllst read about a computer course tlwt really interests you, but it is only for people who have shtdied computing at college or uuiversity. Write a letter to tlte Enrolment Officer asking if you can enrol, explaining your circumstances and asking if he/she will make a special exception for you. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin you r letter as follows: Dear SirIMadam ,
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Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to express my interest
for
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in
of
the computer course at your Change preposition
in
prestrigious
coaching Correct your spelling
prestigious
center
, starting Change the spelling
centre
next
month. however
, I would like to bring to your concern that I may not have some of your entery
level requirements.
I am currently studying at Correct your spelling
entry
new
era public school. As a part of the assessment, every week we have a presentation to Correct article usage
a new
Correct your spelling
deliver
deliever
which requires Correct your spelling
deliver
Add a hyphen
expert-level
expert level
computer skills. According to the outline we are recommended to make Add a hyphen
expert-level
presenatation
on Correct your spelling
presentation
powerpoint
. Due to Correct your spelling
PowerPoint
load
of other Change the article
a load
subjects
I was unable to take computers. Add a comma
,subjects
However
, at this
point, I have gained few
skills through books and magazines,but the knowledge gained doesn’t seem adequate enough.
Could you make an exemption Correct article usage
a few
please
? I would be gratified if given Add a comma
,please
this
opportunity. I can assure you of my fast learning skills and diligence to
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commitments
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Moreover
, if you are doubtful of my capability I can provide you with academic transcripts.
I look forward to hearing from you!
Yours Sincerely,
Shagun RodheSubmitted by shagun.rodhe on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
