Although you have never studied computing, you have always been interested ill computers - you buy magazines about them, and you have taught yourself many skills your computer at home. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have studied computing at college or university. Write a letter to the Enrolment Officer asking if you can enrol, explaining your circumstances and asking if he/she will make a special exception for you. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam,

Dear sir/madam, I am writing to express my interest in
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in the computer course at your prestigious coaching centre, starting
next
month.
however
, I would like to bring to your concern that I may not have some of your entry-level requirements. I am currently studying at a new era public school. As a part of the assessment, every week we have a presentation to deliver which requires expert-level computer skills. According to the outline we are recommended to make a presentation on PowerPoint. Due to a load of other ,
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subjects I was unable to take computers.
However
, at
this
point, I have gained a few skills through books and magazines,but the knowledge gained doesn’t seem adequate enough. Could you make an exemption ,please? I would be gratified if given
this
opportunity. I can assure you of my fast learning skills and diligence in any given commitment.
Moreover
, if you are doubtful of my capability I can provide you with academic transcripts. I look forward to hearing from you! Yours Sincerely, Shagun Rodhe
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