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STRESS CAUSED BY WORK IS BECOMING A MAJOR PROBLEM WORLDWILDE. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW COULD THIS PROBLEM BE TACKLED?

#stress #work #worldwilde
Modern society is prone to be stressed about different situations, and some
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stress
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worldwide
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. Some reasons can explain why
stress
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first
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fast
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factories
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several steps to overcome
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 to get the best results possible.
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people
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 in a
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desperate
 attempt to get more money before the world facing up to
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therapy and meditation or exercise to help
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stress
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stress
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 everyone, there are some solutions to solve
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 situation. It’s hard to avoid
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 from working as well but we always have ways to deal with it
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