The number of people working online from home has grown in some countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, in some countries, the number of
people
who work
remotely from their own places is increasing. This
situation started to grow after the pandemic of coronavirus in 2019. From that day, many companies gave chances for their staff to work
online from their home
. In this
essay, I will present both advantages and disadvantages of this
circumstance.
work
from home
has many benefits ,especially for the employees and employers. Before, the office workers can only do their assignments in the office. If the jobs could not be finished on time, they must stay overtime to finalize the leftover tasks. But with online working, they could bring their work
to their homes and complete the missions anytime. This
condition also
benefits the employer as the company holder
. Replace the word
holds
For example
, when the director needs the report of an affiliation company from his secretary at
off office Change preposition
apply
hour
, he could contact the secretary to fulfil the report and send it to him from her place. Fix the agreement mistake
hours
This
is not happening
if there is no online Wrong verb form
happen
working
.
Replace the word
work
On the other hand
, this
kind of work
also
has disadvantages for some community
. Working online means Fix the agreement mistake
communities
internet
connection is needed all the time. Not all Add an article
an internet
people
have privilege
to access the Change the article
the privilege
internet
anywhere and anytime. For example
, people
who live in the countryside. They could not get the signal properly due to the location of their places. Some of them have to go to higher places to connect to the internet
. Of ,course there is no wifi at their home
.
In conclusion, at some points, working from home
ease employees to complete their jobs whenever and wherever. On the contrary
, it also
makes some people
feel bothered especially because of the internet
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite