Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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Crime is unquestionably one of the prevailing and worrying aspects of any
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. Crime prevention can be executed in two ways,
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through a noble presence in
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and
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through international contribution. I do believe there is a lot which must be done by the government and individuals. On the one hand, by and large, nations must provide enough police force to handle criminals and monitor activities in surrounding areas.
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, authorities must have a budget to apply new technology for surveillance, by putting cameras in all sensitive places,
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, shopping malls, public places, restaurants, and streets to cease criminals.
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, every country must have a law to buy dangerous equipment with only a licence.
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, many countries allowed
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to buy without a licence.
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is the main cause of increased crime all over the globe.
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, criminals must be punished strictly, and have prevention and deterrent effects for all age groups.
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, to my mind, the overwhelming majority of
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tend to participate in government to decrease crimes and keep safe their societies. Many believed individuals cannot protect
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from crimes. I disagree with
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statement because
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make
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and our responsibility to participate with the government to retain crimes in our
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and save our young from any heinous and atrocious activity.
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, it is not easy but we must work out, how we make possible
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. To conclude, in order for a
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to be a safe place to live in, all
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members including the governments and
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must take necessary measures to keep it a crime-free place.
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