Write about city/town you live in now and explain: 1) where is it? 2) how long have you lived there? 3) what you like about it? 4) what you don't like about it? 5) make suggestions on how you hope it might change in future. You will be assessed on you ability to organise, develop and present your ideas clearly and succinctly. (150 words)

The place where I currently live is In Trongsa. It is the central part of Bhutan. It was

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a seat of a Wangchuck dynasty that ruled over the eastern and central of the Country during 18 century.

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, from 1907 it had been ruled by the king of Bhutan. There are less population compared to other districts.The shopkeepers are mostly from all parts of the country (eastern, western, northern and southern). The majority of the population is dependent on agriculture as a source of livelihood. I have been settled here (Trongsa) since 2020 and it's really a beautiful area to live in. The most interesting thing is the region is enriched with different cultures and traditions. They do celebrate various local festivals which I admired the most. In ,addition they give a warm welcome and hospitality when guests / strangers visit them.

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, they stay neat and clean.

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, there is a limited scope of recreational activities. There should be more of it in the community since the majority of the population are youth. They are dependent on alcohol since it is the only thing for them to spend their leisure time.

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, they are squandering a year of saving within a month. If there are recreational activities, it will be really great for the youth/aged people to enjoy their life rather than squandering time on drinking alcohol. As I see it, there should be a community playground since there isn't a single one and

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people need to participate and indeed encourage to engage in sports. Most importantly they should practice meditation as it relieves stress, stay concentrated and keep inner peace. So that it would be a beautiful and majestic place where everyone can stay peacefully.

Lhaki Wed Jul 06 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

289 words

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