Computer are being used more and more in education. Some persons say it is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences

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becoming prevalent in education. Some people are of the view that it is a welcome development, while others express
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towards it. There are relevant points on
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leading to
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have some relevant fact which includes,
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involvement
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cyber crimes
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false
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, internet fraud, web hack, cyber stalking and so on. In their
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, the introduction of
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in the educational
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will
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expose the younger generation to the
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vices.
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the other hand, those who are of the view that
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easy access to the internet
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while carrying out
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research. It is worthy to note that the
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has become a global village
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the
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pivotal.
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light of the above, the introduction of
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to the educational
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is and will always be a landmark achievement and development
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the academic
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era, academic research was relegated and limited to visiting the library and textbook consultations only unlike today
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scholars can now
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well detailed
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and comprehensive research just at their doorstep with the
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. In conclusion, while there are various arguments for and against the
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more and more in the educational
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, personally,
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believe the
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of
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in the educational
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has been of great value to the academic
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and should be given more and adequate attention.
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the introduction of more
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into the education
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