Computer are being used more and more in education. Some persons say it is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences
The
use
of computers
are
becoming prevalent in education. Some people are of the view that it is a welcome development, while others express Change the verb form
is
an ill feelings
towards it. There are relevant points on Correct the article-noun agreement
an ill feeling
ill feelings
the
both sides of Remove the article
apply
this
argument which will be discussed in this
essay and also
, my personal view.
To begin
, some who argue that is
leading to a negative consequences
have some relevant fact which includes, Correct the article-noun agreement
negative consequences
a negative consequence
students
involvement Change noun form
students'
student's
into
cyber crimes Change preposition
in
such
as obtaining by
false Change preposition
apply
pretense
, internet fraud, web hack, cyber stalking and so on. In their Change the spelling
pretence
believe
, the introduction of Replace the word
belief
computers
in the educational system
will further
expose the younger generation to the above mentioned
vices.
Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
In
the other hand, those who are of the view that Change preposition
On
this
is a step in the right direction have some relevant points also
, such
as,
easy access to the internet Remove the comma
apply
world
while carrying out a
research. It is worthy to note that the Correct article usage
apply
world
has become a global village hence
the use
of computers
are
pivotal. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
On
Change preposition
In
the
light of the above, the introduction of Correct article usage
apply
computers
to the educational system
is and will always be a landmark achievement and development to
the academic Change preposition
in
world
. For instance
, in the analog
era, academic research was relegated and limited to visiting the library and textbook consultations only unlike today Change the spelling
analogue
that
scholars can now Correct word choice
when
Correct your spelling
carry out
carryout
Correct your spelling
carry out
a
Remove the article
apply
well detailed
and comprehensive research just at their doorstep with the Add a hyphen
well-detailed
use
of computers
.
In conclusion, while there are various arguments for and against the use
of computers
more and more in the educational system
, personally, i
believe the Change the capitalization
I
use
of computers
in the educational system
has been of great value to the academic world
and should be given more and adequate attention. That is
to say, I urge the relevant authorities to give in their best the upgrade of
the introduction of more Change preposition
apply
computers
into the education system
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