Today's young generation is facing many problems in school and at home. What are the problems? What can parents do to help their teenage children?
Nowadays,
world
is changing faster Add an article
the world
then
ever in technologies and lifestyle, and Replace the word
than
as a result
. Teens facing
many new Wrong verb form
face
problem
in Change to a plural noun
problems
school
and at home
, that their parent
haven't Fix the agreement mistake
parents
face
or Wrong verb form
faced
understand
. Wrong verb form
understood
This
essay will explain some of this
issues and what Correct determiner usage
these
parent
can do to avoid Fix the agreement mistake
parents
it
and understand their teenage Correct pronoun usage
them
children
.
To begin
with, in school
, education is getting tough everyday
, and there is Replace the word
every day
a
cut-throat competition among students. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, playgrounds are getting small or almost vanished in school
, which is necessary, this
will increase pressure on children
for study and without play
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playground
ground
they have less physical activities. For Add a comma
,ground
instant
, there is a Add an article
an instant
school
in my town, where they just focus on study
only on pay time, Wrong verb form
studying
as a
result
student get Add the comma(s)
,result
depress
. Change the verb form
depressed
Furthermore
, not only in school
but they also
face Add an article
the issue
an issue
issue
at Fix the agreement mistake
issues
home
, like loneliness. In today's world, family
are getting nuclear and both Fix the agreement mistake
families
parents
have to work. and leave there
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their
teenager
alone at Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers
home
. This
will Correct your spelling
affect
effect
Correct your spelling
affect
on
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apply
children
, they get bored and use more gadgets.
To overcome from
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apply
this
problems, Correct determiner usage
these
parents
must communicate with their children
regular bases. Select the school
which gives good education as well as also
focus
on sports, which help their mental and physical health. Correct subject-verb agreement
focuses
Also
they
Correct your spelling
the
parents
at home
they
should spend more time with their Correct pronoun usage
apply
children
and encourage for
indoor or outdoor games. Change preposition
apply
For example
, when parent
Fix the agreement mistake
parents
come
from Change the verb form
comes
office
they can play board games or over the weekends they can play Add an article
the office
Correct your spelling
outdoor
out door
games.
To Correct your spelling
outdoor
concluded
, young Change the form of the verb
conclude
children
have many problems like burden
of study and competition in Add an article
the burden
a burden
school
and at home
, due to nuclearizing of family
they feel lonely and use more gadgets, To fight Add a comma
,family
with
Change preposition
apply
this
modern day
issue, Add a hyphen
modern-day
parents
must talk with their children
and give enough time and focus on them.Submitted by nic86 on
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