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nowadays alot of people are able to do their work from home.discuss advantages and disadvantages.

Coronavirus is
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 disease that has led the world to its knees, because of fear, a lot of individuals started to work from
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.
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,
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 has benefits and limitations. The essay below seeks to discuss the cons and pros of working from
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 with, working from
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 has a lot of benefits which include saving
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 and
time
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. When doing work in the comfort of
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's house, there is no need to use the
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 for transport,
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,
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 saves
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 for other things. Another advantage is that
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 parents create bonds with their families as they spend more
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 together.
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, a study in 2021 by a Family Specialist in China ,' King Fuo', showed that about 87 per cent of parents created strong relationships with their children during that year because of lockdown, they spent more
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 together.
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, working in the comfort of
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's
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 may create challenges.
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 challenge is electricity and network. Most countries in Africa have poor networks and some places have no electricity. In
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 case, doing a job from the house becomes impossible.
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 why
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 once said, ''maybe the idea of working from
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 was meant for the developed countries''. Another problem is that at
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 there are a lot of disturbances from children, pets and visitors.
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, working from
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 in Hong Kong is a bit difficult because the apartments are very small, and controlling the noise from neighbours and managing movement and noise from the people in the same house can be a challenge. In conclusion, doing work out of the office has advantages
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 as saving
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 and
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 for parents to bond with their children.
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,
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 may create disadvantages
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 as disturbances from other family members and visitors.
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, poor network connection and unavailability of electricity may hinder the process of working from
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. These and other issues have been discussed above.

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