Experts believe that over the next decade, robots will be doing many of the jobs currently done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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advancement in
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technology
techonology
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technology
grows drastically, that day is not far when
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gonna replace humans everywhere.
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improvement will introduce its own pros and cons that I will discuss in
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To begin
with benefits, robots will be quicker because if
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job is assigned to an
indvidual
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individual
and a machine it will be apparent
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one will finish the
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work
faster.
for example
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to build a five
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story
storey
bulding
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building
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general
genral
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general
labour will take
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at least
atleast
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at least
two years but when its replaced by robots it will be only
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matter of few weeks.
Therefore
,
this
replacement will save time.
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of work will be improved significantly. As when human beings perform
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less likely to be
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as compared to technology. According to
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the automated car tesla
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90% of the accidents that human drivers cannot. Moving towards the drawbacks
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will cause
unemployement
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unemployment
when most
taks
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tasks
will be completed by mechanical beings
then
folks will be jobless.
For instance
, Kiosk
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machines
machiens
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machines
at
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restaurants
retaurants
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restaurants
replaced
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cashiers.
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it will produce
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society because people will always
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on robots to do even basic things like, having a cup of water or
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switching
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switching
off
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from bed these will result
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no physical
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activities
and will make society lazy. To conclude, like all other wonders of science
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will be more than disadvantages.
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