You are about to go on vocation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Write a letter to this friend. In you letter -explain where your friend can get the key to the apartment -give your friend some instructions about using your apartment -recommend some places to go
Dear Dhruvi,
I hope you are doing well and are excited to come to Toronto. I am writing
this
letter to provide you with some information which will help you during your stay in my apartment.
First and foremost, the key to the apartment will be in a shoe rack, which is close to the right-hand side of the main door. Linking Words
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, please ensure that all devices are turned off before you go out. Linking Words
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, you can find all the essentials in the storeroom by the washroom, if you run out of anything.
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, I would recommend you to visit the CN tower, Toronto Island, Ontario Place and Nathen Philip Square in your free time and trust me you will love these.
I hope that you will have a wonderful stay at my house.
Thank you.
With love,
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task achievement
Include more specific details about device usage instructions to enhance clarity.
coherence
Consider separating attractions into a new paragraph for improved clarity.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a clear and warm greeting and closing, establishing a friendly tone.
task achievement
All requested components are covered: key instructions, apartment usage, and local attractions.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,