With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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letters
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some individuals believe that
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these traditional skills could not find
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. I strongly agree with
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people
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their work through computers while they working.
For instance
,
people
use typed
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letters
leters
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letters
,whenever need to give official
letters
such
as
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, employer
letter
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,
proposal
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..etc. They didn't
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time to give handwritten
letters
considering various factors. If there is
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they have to write it again.
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some handwritten
letters
are hard to read. But when you are typing these
letters
,you can easily
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them on the device and can do the correction easily.
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to
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they use e-mail and
other online platform
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to send their official letter rather than posting
letters
which got more time to get
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.
thus
, most
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individuals
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influence to type
letters
by using computers when there are working which is count as
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development.
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, mobile devices
more
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convenient to communicate with
people
rather than posting
letters
. During
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decade there isn't
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way to communicate with
people
who migrated overseas. So
people
tend to write
letters
to them. So it is get considerable time
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response
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from their loved
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. With the technology development, they can send
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message
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to them.
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get
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response without waiting. In conclusion,
people
have more opportunities to communicate
with
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compared to
past
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. So they easily get distance with writing
letters
which will no longer
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in future.I strongly agree with the statement
by
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considering
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change
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people
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over the decades.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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