You have just received an invitation to an art exhibition. You would like more details about the event before you decide to go. Write a letter to the organiser asking for more details. In your letter • thank them for the invitation • ask what kind of art will be on display and the size of each section • ask if any of the artists will be present
Dear Sir/Madam,
I received your invitation
last
week for the art
exhibition. Firstly
, thank you so much for the invite because I love attending such
events.
Although
the invite gives a brief idea about the whole event, I have a few questions related to the exhibition like what kind of art
will be displayed, whether it will be modern art
or antiques. With antiques I mean paintings by famous artists like Hussain or Da Vinci. Apart from paintings, is there any section for old sculptures? Also
, can you tell me about the size of the different art
sections.
I have been to many Change the punctuation
?
such
exhibitions before, and usually, they invite artists. People talk to them about their art
and often take autographs. Will there be any artists coming for this
event as well? And if yes, can you share some details about them?
I am excited and looking forward to this
.
Yours faithfully,
NehaSubmitted by sandeepniet17 on
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positive
Your letter is clear and easy to read. Maintain the clear paragraph structure that you have used, as it helps the reader to understand your points easily.
coherence cohesion
You covered all aspects of the task well. To enhance your letter, you might consider adding a closing line that reiterates your appreciation or eagerness, to leave a lasting positive impression.
positive
The tone of the letter is appropriate and polite. This is excellent for formal letters, so keep this up.
task response
You efficiently thanked the organizer at the beginning, which sets a polite and respectful tone.
coherence cohesion
The transition from thanking the organizer to asking for details is smooth and logical.
task response
Your questions are clear and cover all the required details about the types of art and the presence of artists, making your request comprehensive.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite