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Band 3.5

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart provides information about the
percentage
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 of households in
accommodation
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 in England and Wales. It illustrates whether it was owned or rented
accommodation
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 and is divided into nine periods. Overall, there was a significant change in households in
accommodation
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 over the nine periods, where the
percentage
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 of ownership converted from rented to owned
accommodation
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. While, both ownership types were relatively similar growth or fall over the years, despite the different trends showing from 2001 to 2011.
With regards
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the percentages of owned
accommodation
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 rose significantly over the years, growing from approximately 22% in 1918 to around 69% in 2001. After that, it was followed by a minor decrease to around 64% by the end of 2011.
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, the
percentage
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 of rented
accommodation
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 fell from 78% in 1918 to 68% in 1939. After the
percentage
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 of rented
accommodation
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 was stagnant for fourteen years, the
percentage
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 plummeted to 30% in 2001.
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, it rose slightly to around 37% in the
next
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 decade.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • pattern
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • similarity
  • difference
  • fluctuation
  • outlier
  • exception
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • data
  • feature
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