IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5.5

Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

#tests #examinations #feature #school #systems #countries
Many students routinely have tested in curriculum school.
Examination
Add an article
An examination
The examination
show examples
 can evaluate their levels. In my viewpoint, it is an effective way to classify children. But at the same ,time it
also
 has some cons. In
this
 essay, I will explain
further
 with relevant examples. On the one hand, having quizzes is a key to grading pupils in curriculum school. If they pay attention to study and practice exercises, they will get a good score.
Moreover
, many kids prepare themselves before an examination, as they want to be at the top of the class. When the result came out, their parents and their teachers will know their progress and weakness. These provide developing and improving skills.
For instance
, when you got a bad grade in Physics, you will learn more lessons and do more assignments.
On the other hand
, some kids strive to learn new things or they are not good at some particular subjects, they are facing
hard
Change the article
a hard
show examples
time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
show examples
although
 they attend classes. They do not really understand their lessons so they sometimes try to memorize them. When the quiz is over, kids cannot remember anything.
This
 brings them to suffer from the educational system and makes them fear
testing
Change the verb form
to test
show examples
. One of the major problems with paperwork is the lack of practical work. Since students focus only on tests but they rarely go for the experiments. In conclusion, as roses are always accompanied by thrones
hence
 everything has some pros and cons. There should be a balance between paperwork and experiments.
Submitted by chanida.wng on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: