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Stress-related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays, we are facing mental health problems which are commonly named stress-related. It is assumed, that there is a number of causes that affect health problems which are mostly involved a busy
lifestyle
 and social
media
 usage.
This
 essay will discuss some major causes and solutions provided in the same section. The
first
 reason why some
people
 get sick mentally is that they have a busy
lifestyle
 in society.
For instance
, many young
people
 are working at a company in the city area. They are working under the pressure of the deadline till midnight. After ,work they do not have time for enjoyment with friends or family. So, that kind of busy
lifestyle
 can be leading ignorance of being human and they feel alone and get depressed. Another reason why
people
 get mental health problems is the usage of social
media
.
For example
, many young
people
 get anxiety from fancy pictures or videos on Facebook and Instagram when following celebrity's posts. Because they think
this
 is really their life which cannot be afforded
this
 life or nice products.
This
 situation can impact their self-esteem and they isolate themselves from their close
people
. That can be called depression of self-esteem. In my opinion, solutions can be simple, they should have more closely to their family and friends.
Moreover
, time management and cleaning their social
media
 mutual friends or celebrities are
also
 significant for their personal self-esteem. In Conclusion, there is a number of reasons why
people
 get stress-related illnesses that are increasing in today's world. Those are their chosen
lifestyle
 and social
media
 usage.
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