Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
It is often argued that it is more advantageous to speak fewer
languages
in society. I completely agree with this
opinion and think that having fewer languages
is much more excellent.
First
of all, I believe that speaking fewer languages
provides people
with an easy way to communicate. If everybody used only one language
, they could make contact and be in touch. For example
, we can connect to
foreigners without a translator or interpreter. Change preposition
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This
makes our way of life effortless and uncomplicated. There are no more boundaries between us. That is
why it is more important to have fewer languages
that make our lives easier to contact each other.
Secondly
, speaking individual languages
shows who you are, where you are from, and your background. Each of these languages
is unique and different. They convey our history and traditional culture. People
who are proud of their countries can easily speak their languages
in front of the public. But some people
do not like to speak their own language
because they are not confident and proud of their country. So they learn other languages
and try to communicate. This
leads to accent differences and gaps, as well as race discrimination and racism. Moreover
, learning many language
is complex and Change to a plural noun
languages
hardly
to do because Replace the word
hard
average
person can speak one or two Add an article
the average
language
.
To conclude, I strongly believe that if there are fewer Change to a plural noun
languages
languages
in society, it is more beneficial than many languages
because it makes people
easily connect and decreases differences.Submitted by chanida.wng on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite