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Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some
people
 think that
doctors
 or
engineers
 have to work in the
country
 where they were educated, while others disagree with
this
. In my opinion,
people
 should be free in choosing their living place.
People
 have a right to live wherever they want to. It is not fair to force
people
 to live in a
country
 where are not interested because they finished higher education there in some specific fields like Engineering or Medicine.
For example
, in some developing
countries
, some young
doctors
 and
engineers
 are willing to immigrate to developed and rich
countries
 in order to gain high-paid jobs. They are more motivated and determined to effort in the hope of getting job promotions.
Thus
, in
this
 way they improve their quality of life.
On the other hand
, some
people
 believe
doctors
 and
engineers
 have to work in a place where educated because of some reasons. In some
countries
, there are some public universities which do not have tuition fees. They only accept the top and extraordinary candidates. These universities are supported by governments and citizens' taxes.
Thus
, some citizens believe that students should serve in that
country
 in order to compensate for the government's financial support. Because of
this
 reason, in some
countries
,
doctors
 are obliged to work in the education place for some years. They usually serve in deprived and remote villages. To sum up, there are different opinions about working in the
country
 where
doctors
 and
engineers
 did their training. In my view, they should not be forced and governments should provide good job situation in order to encourage them not to leave that
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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