In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Technology has been changing our lives. We can predict that in the future all
vehicles
will be driverless. People who sitting inside do not have to control it anymore.
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essay will describe the positive and negative aspects. Technology has been changing our lives. We can predict that in the future all
vehicles
will be driverless. People who sitting inside do not have to control it anymore.
This
essay will describe the positive and negative aspects.
To begin
with, in
this
present day, people
are prefer
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to have electrical
vehicles
over the
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decades. The number of usage electrical
vehicles
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significantly increased. It creates more benefits than drawbacks.
For example
, if you have
automatic
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car
, you could use it to drive your
car
and you can spend your valuable time
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other
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or enjoy watching movies,
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some news and
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to music.
Moreover
, as you may
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, a lot of accidents
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because of
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human error. Using automatic
vehicles
may help to enhance safety and effectiveness on the road.
In contrast
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several negative aspects as well.
Firstly
, the top opportunities will be diminished in the future, especially driving
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.
Secondly
, if the system has errors and
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harm, who will be responsible for
this
situation.
For example
, if the
car
makes a mistake and cashes someone on the road, who has to be in charge of
this
accident, maybe the owner of the
car
, company, or software manufacturer. Any decisions that are created by the robotic
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wrong.
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using Artificial intelligence cars. In conclusion, Many companies have been trying to produce electric cars to meet
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customer demand. From my point of view,
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industry has more benefits rather than drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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