Computer is been use more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to a negative consequences

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in learning is on the increase.

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a number of individuals are of the opinion that the rise in e-learning has some benefits, others,

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view,as having untoward effects.

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essay illustrates both views and clearly states my opinion. On the one hand,the increased utilisation of

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in gaining

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has some advantages including better speed and convenience in learning.

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,the use of

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for learning purposes is faster than

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purpose.

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computers

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are built in

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a way that they have the capacity to process

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at better speeds making

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acquisition swift.

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could promote learning in a faster manner, making

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gaining better for the users.To illustrate,the Newyork educational magazines revealed that the adoption of e-learning by the John

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University in the USA,for students about a year ago,has greatly improved the acquisition of knowledgeable

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amongst these students due to the more effective speed at which

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operate.

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,it is more convenient gaining

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through the use of

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that,the users of these

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find it easier

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a wider range of learning tools in search of

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as compared to those patronizing hard copies of materials for

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learning purposes,which could be cumbersome to carry about.

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, gaining more

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through

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means may promote a more relaxed environment and by extension,

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the gain of

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less stressful.

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,the utilisation of

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as a means of assessing

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has a major

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of being too expensive to afford.

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challenge is due to the hike

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the prices of

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e-learning items by various companies and marketers who take advantage of the high demand for and dependence on these learning tools by individuals.

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,purchasing these

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is difficult,making educational drive greatly impaired.

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the Vanguard News had about three days ago stated that the passion for learning amongst the Citizens of Edo state,Nigeria,is been jeopardized gradually owing to the exorbitant cost attached to the e-learning materials. In conclusion,while some individuals think that using

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in acquiring

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,has some advantages,there are others who oppose

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point of view with a negative mindset towards it.I believe that

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the former point of view is worth accepting as a means of getting

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,as against the latter trend.

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recommend the Government invests more

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the educational sector with

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on

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