In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in water, so people think that they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or dis-agree?

In today's world the usage of plastic has been increasing more and more if a person goes shopping he gets out with a plastic bag containing his items and
also
if we buy a cool drink they are been packed in plastic bottles which is not good for health and it
also
increases the pollution. In my point of
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we need to reduce the usage of elastic. To start we use moulded daily to throw the waste from our houses we use moulded bins and
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we use elastic plates to eat our food and moulded bottles to drink water we need to replace it by using paper plates and paper bags or any disposable items because it takes years for pliable to decompose
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if we light them up
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air will be polluted another major problem is soil loses its futility.
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nowadays companies are reducing their non-decomposable materials by using paper packages or wooden packages and recycled materials if we look at Apple retail boxes we can see its made of cardboard. The
second
point is these non-decomposable materials are polluting rivers and the ocean
moreover
they are harming animals living there due to
this
there are some animals that are becoming endangered or even becoming extent. companies these days are
also
concentrating on
this
issue
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Samsung world-leading tech company had used fishing nets and moulded waste which
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left in the seas for making S-pens for their smartphones. To conclude the government should take serious action on
this
issue it's not a small issue and
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tell students from their schooling about the demerits of using it and tell them alternatives to these the best alternative to moulded is wrapper or cardboards and reduce the usage of it or it needs to be totally banned.
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