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Computers are been used more and more in education. Some People say this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to a negative consequences

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It's true that the use of
computer
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computers
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 has increased
as
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 regard
education
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.
However
, there have been debates on
it
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 effects on the educational system. To my mind, I think the benefits surpass the drawbacks.
To begin
, the application of
computer
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computers
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 in learning has caused some defects in inculcating knowledge.
In other words
,
it
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 use has constituted inadequacies on the part of the teachers and the students. For the teacher; it has made them develop
nonchalant
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 attitude as they are no longer interested
on
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 whether the students are carried along or not because their main focus could be to finish up with the class, and
in
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 some
occasions
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 they multitask while tutoring online.
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 goes for the students, as the learning environment or conditions are not controlled. A case in point is when people study or teach from home, they could be easily distracted and progress may be difficult to determine.
Hence
, there is increased indiscipline in learning.
Nonetheless
, the importance of increasing
usage
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 of electronic gadgets in studies can not be overemphasized.
First
, it has made learning easier and less complicated to the extent that people can attend lectures from their comfort zone.
This
 has tremendously reduced the cost of studying, as there may be no need to pay for transportation, and other basic necessities required to attend a course.
For instance
, someone that
intend
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going
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 to school abroad may not need to purchase
flight
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 ticket and get a visa to enable them
travel
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 for studies.
Also
, it saves people the stress of commuting from one location to another as one can smoothly have all classes with the application of a
computer
.
Thus
, electronic devices have assisted in limiting the financial demands and stress associated with education. To conclude, I personally believe that the positives of the rise in
computer
 usage in education outweigh the shortcomings because it has successfully cut down the cost and stress of studying. I recommend it should be encouraged.
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