WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is generally believed that modernization of the world has given an opportunity to union nations in almost every aspect of our lives.

However

, some folk claim that

globalisation

may cause issues in some societies. In my point of ,view

globalisation

has united many human beings and

that is

beneficial for me.

First

of all,

globalisation

has created possibilities for businesses to trade worldwide. Nowadays governments can grow their economy by exporting and

import

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importing

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deals with

other region

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another region

other regions

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from different parts of the globe and

this

helps to improve

lifestyle

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the lifestyle

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of the community.

For example

, developing countries can grow their economy rapidly by trading with already developed land.

Secondly

, people can have families and friends globally and explore new cultures and traditions.

On the other hand

, some individuals from

a certain types

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certain types

a certain type

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of societies and cultures believe that traditions and

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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which

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apply

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left by their ancestors should not be forgotten and

be

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apply

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respected.

For instance

, in some part of the African ,countries there are a lot of ancient tribes who

is even nowadays lives

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is even nowadays living

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like hundred years ago and they do not want changes,

same

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the same

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we can say about

Australian

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the Australian

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aborigines

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aborigine's

aborigines'

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nation. To put it all in the nutshell, in my ,opinion

globalisation

without a doubt has more benefits than drawbacks.