Task 2 Academic Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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around the world adopt alternative

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and treatments from other random remedies despite visiting their normal doctor.

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ignited public attention from time to time, especially among physicians and patients. In the

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controversial topic and my opinion will be given as well.

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and foremost, the physicians do not encourage to set apart from normal treatment instructions. As human nature, people would like to get recover more quickly than the usual ways though that can be harmful somehow back to them.

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, some illegal and non-authorized

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have no clear expired date and the ingredient ratios are sometimes much more than they are needed. Consuming

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ratio-weighted

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can cause problems with the functions of internal organs like the liver and kidneys. Because of that reason, physicians urge patients to consult with professionals to prevent deadly harmful cases.

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, people who do not have enough finances to get treatment

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fall onto using alternative

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to heal illnesses. It is

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undeniable that those alternative remedies can reduce their pains and sicknesses for a certain amount of time.

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, using drugs can make sick people relieve

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it can cause addiction. Being both sides of view considered, both bright and dark sides occupy each face of any issue. I passionately believe that consulting and getting treatments from doctors are the best decisions for the long term somehow it can cost more than other ways. Whereas we need financial grants, we can ask communities or the government to take care of us.