Some companies sponsor sports as away to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. discuss boyh sides and give your opinion.

These days it is common for
companies
to advertise themselves in the
sports
field. Some
people
agree with that
while
others disagree.
However
, I see
this
is a good point for two reasons.
Firstly
,
sports
have a big effect on individuals.
Secondly
,
sports
have a humanity side.
This
essay will discuss both views. I completely agree, with corporate which sponsor
sports
as a way to advertise their item.
Sports
fields have
important
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an important
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effect on
people
's behaviours over the years,
although
the competition in other fields.
For example
, sportsmen who have partnerships with
companies
to do advertisements have more effect on teenagers and adults rather than other ways. the majority of
people
use sportswear from Nike and Adidas since these
companies
use
sports
events and sportsmen to advertise their stuff. In my opinion, it is a smart way to connect with other
people
.
Sports
have a humanity side,
For
this
reason, some
companies
show the world some principles they believe in
sports
.
For instance
, big
companies
choose to interact with global events by
sports
to be able to reach all segments of society.
Sports
is a global platform
for
this
reason is the best option to advertise what the company believe.
To sum up
, In my opinion,
companies
which sponsor to advertise themselves in the
sports
field doing the best strategy to be able to reach all different ages.
Moreover
, sharing with
people
what are you believe and what your principle is a crucial thing and
sports
help to do that.
This
essay discusses both views.
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task achievement
Provide more detailed arguments on both sides of the issue. For instance, explain in greater depth why some people are against companies sponsoring sports.
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Improve the clarity and comprehensiveness of ideas by breaking down complex sentences into simpler ones, and ensure that each main point is thoroughly explained and supported with examples.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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The writer expresses a clear opinion and supports it with reasons.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sponsor
  • advertise
  • brand exposure
  • visibility
  • brand image
  • reputation
  • targeted marketing
  • product placement
  • endorsement
  • support
  • community
  • athletes
  • economic growth
  • oversaturation
  • commercialization
  • unfair advantage
  • financially stronger
  • ethical concerns
  • influence
  • diversion of funds
  • negative publicity
  • backlash
  • beneficial
  • overall
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