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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Advantages/Disadvantages

#experts #children #language #school
It’s often said that
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 learning multiple
language
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 has always been best for a child, it builds a new character and
children
 can get
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exposure
about
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 the new culture by learning
their
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linguistic
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. It has proven that many people
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 that
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children
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children
 should learn a foreign
language
 in primary
school
 in place of secondary
school
.
This
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foreign
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language
 in primary
school
 is an essential part or not. In regard
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 the disadvantages, while learning a foreign
language
 in primary
school
 students can underperform their vital subjects like
Math’s
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 and Science which are more important to improve their academics score and job security in future, whereas every child should understand their native
language
first
 than any other languages,
for
instance
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 an English native speaking student is
also
 learning French and while learning the foreign
language
 they are losing their command on English and making multiple grammatical errors while writing and speaking as well.
Children
first
 expertise their native
language
first
 and
then
 should go for the foreign
language
.
On the other hand
, there are lots of benefits of learning multiple languages in primary
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,
like
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in primary
school
children
 are very eager to learn new things and
adapt
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 new habits, and at
this
stage
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 if they will get a chance to learn a foreign
language
 it will benefit their communication skills and build their character. Learning
foreign
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language
 can
also
 provide various new information about the related country, like when I was learning French, I got to know about how beautiful country France is and it
also
 gives me
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exposure
of
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 France culture. Learning foreign linguistic will always help a child to learn not just
language
 but
also
the
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other traditions. By Concluding
this
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a
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children
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children
 should learn
foreign
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language
 in
there
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 primary
school
 because there
is
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 lots of advantages
in
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 it.
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