IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lesson pressure on worlds fuel resources To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#prices #fuels #decade #two #increases #fuel #world #consumption #lesson #pressure #worlds #resources
While the
fuel
 rates have significantly risen for one or two decades. It is argued that it is the only method by which
fuel
 consumption can be reduced. I completely disagree with
this
 statement.
This
 essay will
first
 discuss how it can create a financial problem for middle-class families, and
then
 suggest that there are other ways by which we can reduce its consumption. Raising the
prices
 of non-renewable resources would lead to a major problem for those
people
 whose earnings are only hand to mouth.
This
 is because
people
use
fuel
 for various household purposes
such
 as gasoline used in cars and natural gas
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
in cooking.
Therefore
, it's not easy for consumers to fulfil their basic needs if the government increases the price of
fuel
.
For example
, a survey in India found that 10
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
 of
people
 have become homeless after Indian states increased the
prices
 of patrols and gas. It does not make sense to say that increasing the
prices
 of fuels will reduce their usage unless the public will not be aware of its detrimental effects.
This
 is to say that the government should launch campaign programs to educate
people
 about the harmful effects of toxins produced by these resources. If the public knows about its disadvantages, they will not be going to
use
 it excessively.
For instance
, South Indian
people
 usually
use
 bicycles for short-distance travelling and North Indians
use
 personal cars so education is the only difference between their thinking. In conclusion, it is clear that increasing gas
prices
 is not the only solution to reduce its utilization because providing education is another way by which
fuel
 consumption can be reduced as well as some families will face trouble while fulfilling their basic requirements.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: