Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to counsume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Processed

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and

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contain harmful chemicals and a lot of

sugar

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causing health problems.

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,

people

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think that sugary products should be expensive to discourage them from purchasing

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items. I do not completely agree with

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state the pons and

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the cons with relevant examples.

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and foremost,

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is important for us as it provides us with energy.

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, a high level of

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consumption is bad for the health as it is the leading cause of diseases

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as diabetes and obesity. Processed

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and

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as soft

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, and burgers contain

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unhealthy amounts

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of

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.

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research done by the University of California more than thirty per cent of

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Americans suffer from diabetes, high blood pressure and obesity due to high consumption of fast

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.

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,

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processed

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are

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comparatively cheaper than healthy meals.

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, authorities should take action to make healthy

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options affordable and increasing the

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of processed

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and

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will encourage

people

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to buy healthy

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and eat more home-cooked meals. On the hand , some

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believe that increasing the

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of manufactured

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and

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and making them unaffordable to middle-income

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is unfair because fast

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and

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had made

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's lives more convenient and easy. To elaborate on

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nowadays have a busy schedule. Most

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do not have to spend hours in the kitchen preparing meals.

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, they rely on fast

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and

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making processed

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expensive will make their lives difficult. In conclusion, it is true that high consumption is bad for the health. But increasing the

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of processed

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and

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will not solve the problem. In my point of view,

people

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should have the freedom of their choice and authorities should step in to reduce the

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of healthy

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