Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. At least 250 words.

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some people believe that nowadays we have too many

choices

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, I would argue that it should

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on different situations. It is true that with the

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of our

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, we are given much more

choices

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than before, which is really obvious.

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of all, with the

development

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of human rights, especially the liberty which is written in our

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, gives us more

choices

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in many aspects,

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, lifestyle, job

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selecting

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and religion. Another reason is that, with the significant progress in

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, the edge of rights and duty is accurate

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means that as long as we are making

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inside the frame of

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, we

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choices

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that will not be

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prohibited

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laws

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, we could choose any lifestyle we want if it is not be sentenced to crime

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, and do anything we want if it is not illegal.

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, even with the

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of our modern

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, there are still many

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in our life which give us

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our choice-making process. My

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reason is that, as the saying goes" Rome is not built

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one day" , our human

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is shaped like the world we are used to after a long period, over thousands of years. It means that

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restrictions

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from

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are not all of them, there are still many others from moralities and our beliefs.

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, we are not permitted or encouraged to do those things which could harm the community, even our country.

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, as I mentioned above,

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are

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violent

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in our lives which means if you break

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governers

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will have the right to arrest you, in order to make

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society

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runs

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in a proper way. All in all, with the

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our

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human beings

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, we are much

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than before to make our own choice, but it doesn't mean that we have too many

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, we are still limited by

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and other

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

337 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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