Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others; however, believed that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion Write your response not less than 250 words. You get 40 minutes to complete this task

It is observed that at times many people believe that

zoos

must shut down because the

animals

inside them are not treated with love,

whereas

there are some who, in fact, think that menageries can be coined for

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safety and security of the

animals

. In my opinion, I agree that zoological parks can prove to help caress the

animals

and,

therefore

, should be promoted and preserved. On the one hand, there are folks who affirm to seize the

zoos

because of the

ill-treatments

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ill-treatment

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the

animals

receive.

Firstly

, they are captivated by their wild habitats by separating them from their family.

This

makes the

animals

sad indeed. Because they are used for

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display, the

animals

are left with no or very little freedom for their movement.

Hence

, those wild species become lethargic.

Secondly

, they

also

become a way of entertainment for the public. So, the trainers

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use harsh techniques to train the

animals

, leaving behind them to be injured. To add

further

, it is a means of generating money though in an illegal way.

For example

, many

zoos

have tie-ups with circuses to showcase their educated

animals

and

thus

earn a side income.

On the other hand

, and I agree, the positive aspects of the zoological parks hold more value than

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daunting traits because of the personal attention, availability of veterinarians etc. One can argue the zoo being a cage, is not good, but at the same ,time it offers and attends to the health of an animal. Since an in-house veterinarian is available, the disease and

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illness can be cured quickly. Another positive note is the available option of

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"elective reproduction" amongst the same breed of

animals

under supervised conditions. That helps in the conservation of an endangered species.

For instance

, nowadays, many horses are being mated

this

way to overcome the scarcity of horses which are dead

due to

failure in derbies.

Lastly

, the menageries do offer timely and nutritious food to

animals

and

therefore

they do not need to sleep on an empty stomach. In conclusion, despite many people's insist that

zoos

need to be abolished because of the authority's lack to provide proper care, in my ,opinion I agree that

zoos

should be promoted as

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offers

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benefits to wild creatures and the environment together.