You have a friend who lives in a different country. You will organise a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe. Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing. In your letter, tell your friend about the party ask for the recipe explain why you need the recipe from his/her country

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Dear John, I hope you are fine there and doing great in your life. You will be glad to know that

finally

, I am going to throw a party

month which I couldn't due to Covid-lock down.

This

party will be organised in my home as you know I have a big lawn

that is

perfect for

this

event.

Moreover

,all my office peers are invited and Indian traditional attire has been decided. Apart from

this

the theme for cuisine is Intercontinental. Most of my colleagues love to eat Italian food.I am good at making pasta but I am not sure about the recipe for Pizza.I want you to guide me on

this

. I remember that when I visited your accommodation

last

year you welcomed me with your homemade pizza and the taste of it was delicious.I can not rely on anybody else for

this

particular food. Since

this

dish is the signature dish of your nation and I want to give an authentic taste to my guests while they eat pizza. I am counting on you so send the recipe as soon as possible because I need to practice it before I cook the final one. I owe you

this

one. Best Regards, Sourabh

Submitted by sourabhgr1 on Fri Jul 08 2022

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