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Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. Do you agree or disagree?

#societies #mixture #peoples #country
In
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 contemporary world, diversity is something
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religion, caste or weather, the choice of people is different.We all are the creations of
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 and the true
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definition
definiton
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 of
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 does not exist at all.
Variety
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 of public exist and among them , some are black , so the others are white.
This
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ethnicity
ethnicty
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ethnicity
 can give rise to many positive things for the nation.But unfortunately, today's generation
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this
.They always prefer to reside with a mass having the same texture and common education sector. Consider an example of any developing country , say India . Census of 2019 says that in South India, 90
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 of the
polulations
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 black but what if they try to interact with the North Indians, both of them will be benefitted in one or
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another way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multiculturalism
  • cultural diversity
  • economic prosperity
  • social cohesion
  • integration
  • cultural assimilation
  • ethnic diversity
  • cultural exchange
  • global influence
  • inclusive governance
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