you recentely receved a letter from a freind asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try tp get a job. you think she should get a job. write a letter to this friend. in your letter - Say why she would not enjoy going to college - explain why getting a job is a good idea for her -suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for her

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Dear Ravi, Hope

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letter finds you well and I am writing

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letter in response to your request for the advice on

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move in your career. I know, it is not easy to ignore and go away from studies, but

on the other hand

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, you have

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remarkable technical stuff which would help you to get a phenomenal salary in the competitive industry. Since I know about your's family economic situation and I strongly recommend you to do any job considering your family's economic situation

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you must look after your home needs and parent's medical requirements as well. If you could get a good job by

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month and you will be cleared all bad debits as your father cannot do and pay any payments. As you obtained a master's degree with distinction marks from a reputed university and I think you must start applying for jobs in management-level jobs and I am sure that you will get it very soon with your strong hardcore skillsets. Once you get a breakthrough in your search and

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, nobody can stop you from anywhere as you are good at crisis management handling and smooth execution of the business processes. I look forward to hearing good news very soon in your job search. I hope you will it very soon. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Fri Jul 08 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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223 words

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