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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign languge. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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LEARNING ANY TYPE OF LANGUAGE
THAT IS
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 FOREIGN PROMOTES EXPOSURE TO DIVERSE CULTURES. IT IS ARGUED THAT THE ONLY REASON FOR
PEOPLE
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 TO EDUCATE THEMSELVES IN A NUMBER OF NATIONAL
LANGUAGES
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 ARE TO TRAVEL AND WORK INTERNATIONALLY, WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT IT IS NOT THE ONLY REASON FOR ACQUIRING NATIONAL TONGUES. I PERSONALLY BELIEVE THAT THERE IS A HUGE NUMBER OF REASONS FOR MASTERING OTHER
PEOPLE
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'S TONGUES.
THIS
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 ESSAY WILL ELABORATE ON MY OPINION.
TO BEGIN
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 WITH, I BELIEVE THAT HUMANS LOVE TO EXERCISE THEIR BRAINS AND EXPLORE DIFFERENT THINGS IN LIFE, LEARNING A STYLE OF SPEECH IS ONE OF THE SKILLS, IN ORDER TO EXPOSE THEMSELVES TO A VAST OF CULTURES, ACQUIRE KNOWLEDGE AND BREAK BARRIERS AMONGST MAN ,
THEREFORE
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, IT BECOMES EASIER TO COMMUNICATE WITH
PEOPLE
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 ALL OVER THE WORLD WHILST REALISING WE ARE ALL THE SAME , WE ARE SEPARATED BY TONE, DIFFERENT SOUNDS AND SHAPE OF
LANGUAGES
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 .
MOREOVER
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, ARTICULATING INTERNATIONAL
LANGUAGES
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 HELPS ONE TO CONNECT TO A DEEPER LEVEL WITH
PEOPLE
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 ALL OVER THE WORLD .
SECONDLY
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,
ALTHOUGH
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 I BELIEVE THAT EXPOSING AND EDUCATING ONESELFTO A NUMBER OF NATIONAL
LANGUAGES
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 ARE NOT ONLY FOR TRAVELLING AND WORKING OVERSEAS
HOWEVER
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 IT IS ONE OF THE SKILLS THAT IF ACQUIRED, DOES ADVANCE YOUR CAREER PATH AND TRAVELLING WORLDWIDE. A BILINGUAL PERSON IS BELIEVED TO BE SMART AND INTELLIGENT, SO THESE KINDS OF
PEOPLE
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 EXCEL EXCEEDINGLY IN MOST CAREER INDUSTRIES,
FOR INSTANCE
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, THERE ARE SOME
LANGUAGES
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 THAT ARE NOT EASY TO BE TRANSLATED INTO ENGLISH
THEREFORE
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 IT BECOMES A BENEFIT IF YOU KNOW THAT SPECIFIC NATIVE ACCENT. TO SUM UP, ACQUIRING KNOWLEDGE OF DIVERSE OR EXTERNAL
LANGUAGES
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 APART FROM YOUR MOTHER TONGUE IS A MERIT TO SUCCESS AND AT THE SAME TIME THOSE THAT NEEDS TO TRAVEL AND WORK IN OTHER NATIONS.

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