The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no shortage of opinions on whether it was necessary or not to spend a huge number of resources in the
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century on
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travel. But if I were forced to choose, I would definitely say that the landing on the moon was truly a great leap for mankind. It is my firm belief that for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
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of all, the vast majority of nowadays inventions actually went from a military industry. The
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race between the Soviet Union and the US combined all the greatest engineers and scientists to reach the goal of building the best rockets and
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, it led to devising new technologies like power microchips, personal computers, protected networks etc.
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, after the ending of the
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race, a bigger part of inventions came to the public and it caused a sharp rise
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electronics in the following years.
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, computers and the Internet are just a few examples of things we use since that time. It is certainly clear to see why cosmic programs have a positive impact, as today we cannot even imagine how to exist without laptops and social networks.
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, people were always curious about stars and objects which they can easily see at midnight. There are a lot of books and stories being written about
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topics, especially about the colonization of other planets or the invasion of aliens to our Earth. And the thing is even our generation does not leave hopes for
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travelling.
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, Elon Musk with his company
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X promised to send rockets to Mars and his test flights have already succeeded, so we might see the launch in the near future. For
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reason, I think that Nil Armstrong's statement about the great step forward for mankind was on point. To sum up, in light of the above-mentioned reasons, I want to emphasize that people always were eager to discover more about other worlds and life behind the Earth,
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expedition to the moon made a difference
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what we have now.
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