Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In
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contemporary era,
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immigration
migration
emigration
imigration
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immigration
to developed countries is one of the popular things among people, who live in developing ones. As a matter of fact, there are a good few problems, they would face with them,
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as
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culture
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shock
, anxiety, disable to make a
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communication with
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population, due to lack of inadequate
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skills, etc.
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, going abroad have a number of
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disadvantages
disadvanteges
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disadvantages
for humans.
This
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article has been written to discuss
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the influences
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of
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on
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flanks
life.
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of all, many of us have been thinking other nations are better than mine.
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, they have tried to find
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and good life in another destination,
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decision demand
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some features, like
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an adequate
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level of
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.
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, ability to communicate with not alien society,
psycologist
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psychologist
psychologists
strongly believe, major
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drawback
of
imigration
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immigration
emigration
is the feeling of
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loneliness
, which is related to lack of self-confident, especially when we try to
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speak
with local nations, because we thought, if we use the word in a wrong place, they will make a joke of us. So we would rather be alone or communicate with our
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who
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same
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nationality.
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, if
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immigrants
imigrants
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immigrants
have
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excellent
exellent
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excellent
general
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knowledge about their
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home, they are able to make new friends.
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, connect with people who do not have
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equal
equall
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equal
originality.
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, Iranian and Turkish nations have
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awesome relationship, just because of their cultures, movies, and the same grammar, which are almost close. Eventually, if you have
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about your destination,
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it
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can live in that country
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without
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without
serious
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difficulties
difficalties
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difficulties
. Overall, making communication with
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strange
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needs
language
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skills. So for people who
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to go oversea, capability in
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language
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is
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necessary
nessesary
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necessary
. The more you are able to speak with
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native
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natives
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, the more you can
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adapt
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with
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that society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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