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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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For most
students
 these days, memorising is the best way to succeed in studying.
However
, some other learners prioritize the practical and prefer problem-solving techniques. In the below essay, I will discuss my agreement with the given statement above.
To begin
 with, most people memorising things in many situations, including education which is the main way to get
a high grades
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 in results. The main reason to give agreement
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 statement
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 much as
students
 try to keep remembering things their minds blow up and will be able to memorise better and they can perform better in the examination.
For example
, in a few subjects like computer programming languages,
students
 need to keep remember the correct flow and integration techniques to give better examples in exams.
However
, there are a few other ways as well to do best in exams
such
 as practice and getting a better understanding
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 the topic. learners must know about the thing they are reading not just keep remembering those words.
Therefore
, learners should have the capability of solving problems with their knowledge.
For example
, in Math subject just keeping formula remember will not help to solve the questions in an exam.
students
 need to practice on the same and solve questions as much as they can. In conclusion, memorising is an essential thing in learning and teaching.
However
, it is not the most important thing to get higher results in school and university. Doing practical study and problem-solving techniques is another good way to extend their knowledge which will help
students
 long-lasting.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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