In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

For some

people

in several countries, having their own

property

is very essential for them

instead

of

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renting one. Here, I would like to explain

about

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the possible causes and give my personal opinion about

this

situation.

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the subject of human needs, owning a

home

is considered

as

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a primary need that comes after food and clothing.

Thus

, having a house becomes very important for many

people

and perhaps becomes the

first

priority on everybody’s bucket list.

This

condition is

also

emphasized by the opinion about having

a

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property

as a part of social status. According to both views, it makes sense that

people

prefer owning a

home

to renting in light of its importance and the impact on their status in

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society. Even though a

home

is a basic need for

human

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being

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, I do not think that owning

property

is a big deal. To take Jakarta as an example, the price of the land in the

city

is exorbitantly high and somehow does not meet

people

’s ability to afford the house within the

city

.

Consequently

, many

people

opt for buying a

property

in the

suburb

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area which is quite far from the

city

center

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. Inevitably,

this

circumstance actually brings

the

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lack of efficiency since the workers need more time to commute to their workplace in Jakarta as well as spending more money

for

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transportation. According to

National

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Survey of Workers Behavior in Jakarta, the comparison between the cost of renting a house inside the

city

and having one outside the

city

are

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rather the same. In conclusion, owning a

home

is a primary need for the

people

and somehow can be a symbol of social status.

However

, it is worth

to rent

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a

property

at the cost of efficiency for those who can not afford to have one near their workplace area.