Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter - explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital. - say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do. - give details of when you would be available for this work.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter in regards to the
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advertisement
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advertisement
in the local newspaper from the hospital seeking
for
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people who can work unpaid during their free time. I have recently moved to
this
city and currently working with an IT company as a receptionist. From my school days, I always volunteer during my leisure time for social community
works
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and was looking for
such
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opportunity
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an oppurtunity
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oppurtunity
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opportunity
in
this
new place. Upon seeing
this
requirement, I thought
this
would be an amazing service that I can get involved with. As I mentioned above, since I am experienced to manage the reception area, I can provide the same role in
this
medical facility. I can attend telephone calls; politely speak to the patients and their guests; hospital
rooms
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management; and
some
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administration tasks.
Also
, note that I can be quite
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helpful
helpfull
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helpful
with some account
works
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as I majored in that subject. I am available over the weekends on Saturdays between 08.00 AM to 05.00 PM and on Sundays between 08.00 AM to 01.00 PM.
Also
, I have attached my CV and certificates for your reference, please review
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let me know whether my profile suits your needs. I am looking forward to
hear
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from you. Thank you. Yours Sincerely
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