Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter - explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital. - say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do. - give details of when you would be available for this work.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in regards to the

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advertisment

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in the local newspaper from the hospital seeking

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people who can work unpaid during their free time. I have recently moved to

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city and currently working with an IT company as a receptionist. From my school days, I always volunteer during my leisure time for social community

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and was looking for

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opportunity

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oppurtunity

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opportunity

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new place. Upon seeing

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requirement, I thought

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would be an amazing service that I can get involved with. As I mentioned above, since I am experienced to manage the reception area, I can provide the same role in

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medical facility. I can attend telephone calls; politely speak to the patients and their guests; hospital

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management; and

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administration tasks.

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, note that I can be quite

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helpful

helpfull

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helpful

with some account

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as I majored in that subject. I am available over the weekends on Saturdays between 08.00 AM to 05.00 PM and on Sundays between 08.00 AM to 01.00 PM.

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, I have attached my CV and certificates for your reference, please review

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let me know whether my profile suits your needs. I am looking forward to

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from you. Thank you. Yours Sincerely

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

209 words

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