Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

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the 21st

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A lot of adolescents make plenty of donations to the academy and sports segments.

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at schools and universities , I strongly agree with

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, institute programs should include these programs for culture,

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, when children study at seminary, not only study subjects they need to give some donation or section help

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other organisations. I believe that in eventual academy teens will give beneficial material or magnificent help, Nowadays, in Education programs I did not see any involving program between schools and universities, We

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should

give them

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any kind of program, They should improve their mental health, psychological condition and lifestyle condition. In my opinion,

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must do these programmes in the Education system so our future leadership will perfectly improve their thoughts and minds.

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, I strongly agree, helping any charity programmes

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as

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helping

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orphanage children and old pensioner humans

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segments very

strong

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benefit

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our knowledge. I really agree that our future

generation

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We

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need

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charity

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and sport teach the young

generation

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kind of matter our

generation

will teach their prospective youngsters.

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good relationships with an endowment in Europe and in the USA. they are giving to poor condition families,

such

as finances,clothes, and these things, we need to depict their charities in our captaincy and teach if we do these segments our

generation

will be the best individuals after four decades.

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, after four decades our imminent captaincy will develop our culture system and involve

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lit of philanthropy programmers, I strongly believe that

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teach

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at school and higher disciplines if we

will

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do

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programmer

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program

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in the 25th century our eventual captaincy is ready.