“Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are equally responsible for solving this problem” To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Over the past 100 years, the
lifestyle
of children
has drastically shifted from an outdoor active style to a sedentary indoor lifestyle
. This
has caused an unhealthy way of living for many children
and this
is not only caused by parents
but also
by schools
. This
essay will argue that children
are living an unhealthy lifestyle
and who is to blame.
While I completely agree with the opinion above some can argue that the given statement is not true. While some kids are living unhealthy lifestyles this
does not encompass the whole demographic. The majority of children
are active and maintain a good balance of indoor and outdoor activities. This
is especially true during the summer months, for example
, when children
go out to play football, basketball and other sports. This
is encouraged by parents
and schools
. Furthermore
, schools
also
have physical education classes and break time, where kids play outside. These facts show why arguments can be made to disagree with the given statement.
However
while the above is partially true, in my opinion, I think that kids spend too much time sitting at home playing video games such
as Fortnight and Minecraft, among others. This
is the fault of parents
who are not encouraging their children
to go out and play. Furthermore
, while schools
do run physical education classes, they are limited in: what they teach, how often they occur and the limited space for children
to fully take advantage of the class. This
means that they are not getting enough exercise to have a healthy lifestyle
. The combination of the above facts means the cause of this
bad lifestyle
is both the parents
and the school system.
In conclusion, the essay argued that some children
do maintain a healthy lifestyle
, while the majority do not. In my opinion, I agree with the former and think more can be done to improve the lifestyle
of our future generations.Submitted by h_alchalabi on
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