“Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are equally responsible for solving this problem” To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Over the past 100 years, the

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of

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has drastically shifted from an outdoor active style to a sedentary indoor

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has caused an unhealthy way of living for many

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and

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is not only caused by

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but

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by

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essay will argue that

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are living an unhealthy

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and who is to blame. While I completely agree with the opinion above some can argue that the given statement is not true. While some kids are living unhealthy lifestyles

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does not encompass the whole demographic. The majority of

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are active and maintain a good balance of indoor and outdoor activities.

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is especially true during the summer months,

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, when

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go out to play football, basketball and other sports.

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is encouraged by

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and

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.

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,

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have physical education classes and break time, where kids play outside. These facts show why arguments can be made to disagree with the given statement.

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while the above is partially true, in my opinion, I think that kids spend too much time sitting at home playing video games

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as Fortnight and Minecraft, among others.

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is the fault of

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who are not encouraging their

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to go out and play.

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, while

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do run physical education classes, they are limited in: what they teach, how often they occur and the limited space for

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to fully take advantage of the class.

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means that they are not getting enough exercise to have a healthy

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. The combination of the above facts means the cause of

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bad

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is both the

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and the school system. In conclusion, the essay argued that some

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do maintain a healthy

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, while the majority do not. In my opinion, I agree with the former and think more can be done to improve the

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of our future generations.