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In today’s world, due to improper diet and unhealthy eating habits, people are suffering from obesity especially children. It is often said that the government should take charge of this issue. This article will examine the reasons for my disagreement with the aforementioned assertion.

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In today’s world, due to improper diet and unhealthy eating habits, people are suffering from obesity ,especially
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. It is often said that the government should take charge of
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 issue.
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 article will examine the reasons for my disagreement with the aforementioned assertion.
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, an important reason behind
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 situation is the increase in the consumption of junk food. As a reason for technological advancements,
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 type of food is prepared and delivered instantly, due to which the availability became abundant. Most importantly, parents should take the responsibility to guide their
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 rather than having it monitored by the government.
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 must be taught about the confrontation of various diseases that are caused due to obesity and
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 unhealthy diet.
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, especially in western countries, people have developed a habit of consuming a lot of junk food
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 as Pizzas, burgers and many more.
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, the educational institutions should play a major role in developing the intellect of students which in turn helps them to distinguish between good and bad. Teachers should make sure that students are effectively utilizing the playground and attending physiological exercise sessions along with their studies.
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, there has been an increase in the establishment of gymnasiums, workouts, yoga and many more.
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, students should take
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 opportunity and try to develop physical fitness which aids them in maintaining good health. To conclude,
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 should be made aware of the importance of well-being and having a healthy lifestyle, especially by their parents and teachers.
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