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English is becoming the most prominent language in the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having only one language in the world?

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Nowadays, English is
one
 of the most popular and influential
language
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.
Although
 having a single
language
 will be effortless to communicate all over the
world
 , the culture of indigenous
languages
 will be at risk.In my opinion,the idea of using a single
language
 is welcoming.In
this
 ,essay we will be discussing the benefits and drawbacks in detail.
To begin
 with,
One
 of the major advantages of having a single
language
 is
an
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the
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 exchange of content and ideas all over the
world
 will be easy.Because
,
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The grasping of content will be done easily by the people who are present in all parts of the
world
.
Moreover
,If we travel to other parts of the
world
,
Then
 there is no chance of getting hesitant while interacting with them.
Additionally
,we can expand our social network by communicating painlessly.
For instance
,When I visited Germany
last
 year,I faced a
language
 barrier so I could not make a bond properly with them.
For Example
,I wanted to access the German
language
 novels but I could not because I did not have any prior knowledge regarding that
language
.According to me,Having
one
language
 is more beneficial and feasible.
In contrast
,The major obstacle to using only
language
 for communication purposes is the loss of culture and heritage of various communities and the extinction of tourism as an industry.
Moreover
,The indigenous groups and their communication pattern may go extinct.On top of that,The ancient traditional barriers would break and it may cause an impact on society ethically and morally.On top of that,If there are many
languages
, learning multiple
languages
 can increase our brain strength.
For example
,The communities which are residing in the amazon forest, are using their native
language
 to interact with each other,They get impacted if we implement a single
language
 policy. I think that
,
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The native
languages
 would go endangered. To sum up ,English is
one
 of the most spoken
languages
 in the
world
.I believe that using only
language
 will be not suggestible because the people of several communities
also
 might be questionable of their existence.
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