Do you believe that scientific experimentation on animals is justified? Are there any alternatives to animal experimentation?

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ongoing debate in the medical world about the ethics of using
animals
for medical tests. I believe that it is totally fair to use them for medical experiments for the reasons that I will demonstrate in
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essay as well as possible alternatives. Medicine should be tested before it is deemed safe
on
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humans
. Many scientists will argue that using pets could be the only way approved way to check the efficacy of certain
drugs
for many reasons.
first
of all, many
animals
share 98% with
humans
.
Secondly
, many
animals
are susceptible to the same disease as
humans
,
such
as cancer, diabetes, heart disease, and so forth.
Moreover
, many
animals
have
shorter
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life cycle than
humans
.
Thus
, it is justified that
animals
can be studied
through
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their whole life span generation in order to check the safety and effectiveness of certain
drugs
before testing them on people. New medicine should be tested
as
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to avoid potential dangerous effects including damage, toxicity, or
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cancer causing
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animals
. If medical
researchers
did not test these medications using
animals
, they would not
reached
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any advances in the field of
drugs
and medicine.
In addition
, these tests can
also
improve the
life
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of
animals
as well.
However
, other
researchers
will claim that scientists can resort to other alternatives.
For instance
, computer programs could be used to predict the level of toxicity of
drugs
or any possible side effects.
Furthermore
, traditional model testing can be replaced with non-animal testing like, biochemical or cell-based
system
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.
Additionally
, one animal species can be replaced with less developed ones, as mice can be substituted with worms.
Researchers
can
also
investigate methods that use a limited number of animal species. In summary, I believe that testing
animals
for testing medication
is
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legit as long as
researchers
abide
the
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ethics of using
animals
.
Also
,
animals
share a lot of things in common with
humans
. Yet, I believe that scientists should look for more substitutes in the foreseeable future.
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